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The maps show the current building and site layout of a college, and the proposed future changes.

The maps show the current building and site layout of a college, and the proposed future changes. 30jnY

Overall, the main changes to the college will include the expansion and renovation of the college building, with the addition and removal of several rooms and facilities. A number of changes to facilities outside of the building are also proposed. The existing entrance to the building is on the northern side and accessed via a footpath which runs adjacent to the garden on the north and the carpark on the western side of the building. The future plans propose that the new entrance will be on the southern side of the building, adjacent to the main road and bus stop. The footpath and garden surrounding the building will be removed, and the existing carpark expanded to accommodate more cars. Inside the building, there is currently a classroom, reception, and library along the eastern side. The future plans propose that the reception will be moved to the centre of the building towards the new entrance at the south, and the library relocated to the western side, making way for four new classrooms. The toilets will be moved to the opposite end of the building, where the old entrance was, and a new shop will be built next to the existing lunch area.

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