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The line chart illustrates the unemployment rate in Ireland and the number of people migrate the nation from 1988 to 2008. The data has calibrated in percentage and measured in number. Overall, it is seen that from 1990 to 2008 the unemployment and number of individuals leaving the Ireland showed a similar pattern. Moving to detail, the unemployment rate was 18 % in year 1988 and they were slightly fall over the year 1990 nearly 6 %. In year 2000 the unemployment rate was slowly grown to 9 % in 2008. Probing to further, from 1988 to 1990 there was a dramatic rise in the number of leaving Ireland. It inclined from 20, 000 in 1988 to nearly 60, 000 in 1990. After 1990, they were sharp decline to till 2000 about 30, 000. After 2000, there was again a moderate rise in the number of the people leaving Ireland and by 2008 this number was 40, 000.
The line chart illustrates the
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rate in Ireland and the
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of
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people
migrate the nation from 1988 to 2008. The data has calibrated in percentage and measured in
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.
Overall
, it is
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seen
that from 1990 to 2008 the
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and
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of individuals leaving the Ireland
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showed
a similar pattern. Moving to detail, the
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rate was 18 % in year
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1988 and
they were
slightly
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fall
over the year 1990
nearly
6 %. In year 2000 the
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rate was
slowly
grown to 9 % in 2008. Probing to
further
, from 1988 to 1990 there was a dramatic rise in the
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number
of leaving Ireland. It inclined from 20, 000 in 1988 to
nearly
60, 000 in 1990. After 1990, they were sharp decline to till 2000 about 30, 000. After 2000, there was again a moderate rise in the
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number
of the
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people
leaving Ireland and by 2008 this
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was 40, 000.
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