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The maps show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006.

The maps show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. EwlGb
The given map demonstrates the progressed in Bell Hill Farm between 1976 and 2006. A glance at the figure shows that, during the given time period on the question, Bell Hill Farm had experienced huge changes. Although the main road and farmer house remain steady in their locations, applications of other facilities are changed. As can be seen, in 1976, there was a farmland in the center of map, but it is destroyed and changed to recreation area for peoples. Also, just next to farmland in 1997, there was a location for animals while it changed to a dormitory for students in 2006. In addition to these changes, parking space and multimedia room are established in 2006 where were storage and space for growing corns respectively. On the other hand, farmhouse which was in the southern of the area in 1976, it still was stayed at the same place.
The
given
map demonstrates the progressed in Bell Hill Farm between 1976 and 2006.

A glance at the figure
shows
that, during the
given
time period on the question, Bell Hill Farm had experienced huge
changes
. Although the main road and farmer
house
remain steady in their locations, applications of other facilities are
changed
.

As can be
seen
, in 1976, there was a farmland in the center of map,
but
it is
destroyed
and
changed
to recreation area for peoples.
Also
,
just
next
to farmland in 1997, there was a location for animals while it
changed
to a dormitory for students in 2006.
In addition
to these
changes
, parking space and multimedia room
are established
in 2006 where were storage and space for growing corns
respectively
.

On the other hand
, farmhouse which was in the southern of the area in 1976, it
still
was stayed
at the same place.
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IELTS academic The maps show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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