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The maps show the changes of a community center 10 years ago and until the present

The maps show the changes of a community center 10 years ago and until the present NrlJW

The two maps show alterations in the layout of a community centre after 10 years. Overall, it can be seen that the community centre has been significantly reconstructed and renovated after ten years, while some minor features witnessed no change. In the central part of this building, the 100-seat hall, which accounts for the biggest field, remains unchanged over the ten-year period. A toilet has been added to its north, making the adjacent storage room shrink by half. To the west of this Center, the garden has been demolished to make way for an indoor sports facility, whereas the parking lot stays intact. Looking at the map in more detail, four office rooms and the storage room have been replaced with a coffee space. While the working operation has been relocated to the original spot of the coffee place, the storage room has been completely demolished. Finally, the southern entrance and reception space and the kitchen on the southeast of the building are kept untouched.

The two maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 alterations in the layout of a community Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 after 10 years.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the community Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 has been significantly
 reconstructed and renovated after ten years, while This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 minor features witnessed no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
.

In the central part of this building, the 100-seat hall, which accounts for the biggest field, remains unchanged over the ten-year period. A toilet has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to its north, making the adjacent storage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 shrink by half. To the west of this Center, the garden has been demolished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for an indoor sports facility, whereas the parking lot stays intact.

Looking at the map in more detail, four office You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 and the storage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 have been replaced
 with a coffee space. While the working operation has been relocated
 to the original spot of the coffee place, the storage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 has been completely demolished. Finally
, the southern entrance and reception space and the kitchen on the southeast of the building are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 untouched. 