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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. 15amX
The given maps unveils the changes have been carried out for betterment of University area. The maps compares between situation of University area 11 years back in 2010 and presentday. It can be seen that, the long and sitting area is no longer available now, but the lake area remained as it is. In 2010, The university offices, shops and restaurants like student facilities were available at various locations and had separate buildings but in present day, all student facilities are include in just one building. Teaching block of art and science had normal two floor building and now in present day it is changed into arts building with multistray infrastucture. On the place of shop there is student accommodation is allotted now in present day, and a new road is constructed near the student accommodation building.
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changes
have
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out for betterment of University
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area
. The maps
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between situation of University
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area
11 years back in 2010 and
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presentday
. It can be
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seen
that, the long and sitting
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area
is no longer available
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now
,
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but
the lake
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area
remained as it is. In 2010, The university offices, shops and restaurants like
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student
facilities were available at various locations and had separate
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buildings
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but
in present day, all
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student
facilities are
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include
in
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just
one
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building
. Teaching block of art and science had normal
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two floor
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building
and
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now
in present day it is
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changed
into arts
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building
with
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multistray
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infrastucture
. On the place of shop there is
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student
accommodation
is allotted
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now
in present day, and a new road
is constructed
near the
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accommodation
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building
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IELTS academic The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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