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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. 6Oqr
The given diagrams above demonstrate the various reasons of air contamination between China, America, Japan and Australia at present time. Overall, it is explicitly conspicuous that the highest rate of air pollution due to industry, how is supposed is belongs to China, as one the biggest country in the world80 PPM. While the least place of air pollution is occupied by Japan from electricity generation about 18 PPM. Now, turning to the details, it can be seen that in Australia the air pollution indexes of three varieties almost the same approximately 20 PPM. It is clearly observed that in the USA the hugest pollution due to transport. China and Japan have the indetical situation in ocassion of air pollution causes. It could be noticed that in both governmets the causes from industry are exceeded among three ones, thus these countries are the industrial giants. Second place exists to transport and the last from electrecity buildings.
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diagrams above demonstrate the various reasons of
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contamination between China, America, Japan and Australia at present time.

Overall
, it is
explicitly
conspicuous that the highest rate of
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air
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pollution
due to industry, how
is supposed
is belongs to China, as one the biggest country in the world80 PPM.
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While
the least place of
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pollution
is occupied
by Japan from electricity generation about 18 PPM.

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Now
, turning to the
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details
, it can be
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seen
that in Australia the
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air
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pollution
indexes of three varieties almost the same approximately 20 PPM. It is
clearly
observed that in the USA the hugest
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pollution
due to transport. China and Japan have the
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indetical
situation in
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ocassion
of
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air
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pollution
causes. It could
be noticed
that in both
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governmets
the causes from industry
are exceeded
among three ones,
thus
these countries are the industrial giants. Second place exists to transport and the last from
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electrecity
buildings.
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IELTS academic The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

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155 words
6.0
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