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The map shows how a Colwick Arts center has developed over the last six years

The map shows how a Colwick Arts center has developed over the last six years L36br
The map shows how a Colwick Arts center has developed over the last six years(2005-2021). There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in the central exhibition area and drama studio, decreases a gallery and removal of wasteland. In 2005, there was a wasteland south of the Art Center. As you move north, there are 3 parts building. On the opposite side, the information desk was there and the behind of it central hall/cinema is placed. Two gallery buildings are located on the right side of the campus. In the left part of the map, it is settled in the northernmost part of the snack bar and then the opposite side of it were the buildings of the waiting hall and toilet respectively. Turning to the present-day map, it can be seen that the wasteland has all gone, being replaced by a greenbelt and the stage is put in the middle of there. After evergreen trees on the left side is a cafe, in the middle of the area the information desk has existed and in the right cozy side of the map toilet has placed. Near the cafe is the concert hall and at the left top of the hall is the cinema, actually, these 2 buildings are parted. To the northwest of the cinema is the studio and if we keep going we arrive at meeting rooms 1 and 2. If we move down from the waiting rooms, we will reach the gallery building(in fact two buildings in the previous are combined). This residence is close to the cafe. In the middle of the new space, the central exhibition is spotted. To sum up, the area was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes to its green space, its specialized artistic and recreational facilities were developed.
The
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how a Colwick Arts center has developed over the last six years(2005-2021). There have been several
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changes
, the most noticeable being the increases in the central exhibition area and drama studio, decreases a gallery and removal of wasteland.

In 2005, there was a wasteland south of the Art Center. As you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
north, there are 3 parts
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building
. On the opposite side, the information desk was there and the behind of it central hall/cinema
is placed
. Two gallery
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buildings
are located
on the right side of the campus. In the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
part of the
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map
, it
is settled
in the northernmost part of the snack bar and then the opposite side of it were the
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buildings
of the waiting hall and toilet
respectively
.

Turning to the present-day
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map
, it can be
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seen
that the wasteland has all gone,
being replaced
by a greenbelt and the stage
is put
in the middle of there. After evergreen trees on the
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left
side is a
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cafe
, in the middle of the area the information desk has existed and in the right cozy side of the
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map
toilet has placed. Near the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
is the concert hall and at the
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left
top of the hall is the cinema, actually, these 2
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buildings
are parted
. To the northwest of the cinema is the studio and if we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
going we arrive at meeting rooms 1 and 2. If we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
down from the waiting rooms, we will reach the gallery building(in fact two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
in the previous
are combined
). This residence is close to the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
. In the middle of the new space, the central exhibition
is spotted
.

To sum up, the area
was renovated
extensively
, seeing fundamental
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
to its green space, its specialized artistic and recreational facilities
were developed
.
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