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The maps illustrates the information about the variations of pancha village from 2005 to 2015

The maps illustrates the information about the variations of pancha village from 2005 to 2015 NMJxm
Overall, it is clearly seen that, pancha village was totally modernaised in 2015 by including well prepared road, school and electercity. In 2005, in the north-east direaction a primary school was situated by two buildings. by contrast, in 2015, the school was divided into two parts primary and secondry schoolin which had three buldings. in 2005, in pagoda just two houses were built in south-east direction, but in 2015 three small houses were built. in the center of the pagoda and primary school, three houses were situatedin 2005 whereas, in 2015, two houses were totally disapper from same place. where just mere house was situated. Number of houses were located in north- west direction in 2005 and it take same place in 2015. Likewise, a stone road was avialable for moving one place to another placein 2005. Which, was situated in the center of the pancha village. but, in 2015, this road was converted into well prepared road with traffic signs and alone with electercity line. in 2005, the market wasopen in south-west, but in 2015, the area of market was extend.
Overall
, it is
clearly
seen
that,
pancha
village was
totally
modernaised
in 2015 by including
well prepared
road
,
school
and
electercity
. In 2005, in the north-east
direaction
a primary
school
was situated
by two buildings.
by
contrast, in 2015, the
school
was divided
into two parts primary and
secondry
schoolin
which had three
buldings
.
in
2005, in pagoda
just
two
houses
were built
in south-east direction,
but
in 2015 three
small
houses
were built
.
in
the center of the pagoda and primary
school
, three
houses
were
situatedin
2005 whereas, in 2015, two
houses
were
totally
disapper
from same place.
where
just
mere
house
was situated
. Number of
houses
were located
in north- west direction in 2005 and it
take
same place in 2015.
Likewise
, a stone
road
was
avialable
for moving one place to another
placein
2005.
Which
,
was situated
in the center of the
pancha
village.
but
, in 2015, this
road
was converted
into
well prepared
road
with traffic signs and alone with
electercity
line.
in
2005, the market
wasopen
in south-west,
but
in 2015, the area of market was
extend
.
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