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The maps illustrate the development of Frenton between 1990 and 2012.

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The maps illustrate the development of Frenton between 1990 and 2012. Overall, it is clear that the Frenton had fewer trees and more buildings appeared than 32 years ago. In 1990, Frenton was a small town, which was bisected into almost equal parts by the High Street. Towards the immediate East of the street, there was a café and a park and next to it, there were settlements (Houses). A theatre and some shops were there towards the South-east of the street. The four major establishments to the West of the street were a school, a bank, a hospital and a library. There was also a playing field with trees at the North of the town, adjacent to the street.
The maps illustrate the development of
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Frenton
between 1990 and 2012.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the
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Frenton
had fewer trees and more buildings appeared than 32 years ago.

In 1990,
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Frenton
was a
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small
town, which
was bisected
into almost equal parts by the High
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Street
. Towards the immediate East of the
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street
, there was a café and a park and
next
to it, there were settlements (
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Houses
). A
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theatre
and
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some
shops were there towards the South-east of the
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street
. The four major establishments to the West of the
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street
were a school, a bank, a hospital and a library. There was
also
a playing field with trees at the North of the town, adjacent to the
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street
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate the development of Frenton between 1990 and 2012.

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120 words
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