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The maps illustrate the coal mine and its transformation into a visitor attraction site. Key feature:

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The maps illustrate the coal mine and its transformation into a visitor attraction site. The coal mine had several key features. The main entrance was situated at the center of the mine. Lunchroom and Staff change rooms were located at North-west corner of the site. There was a medical center and parking space for a lorry on the West. In addition, there were two waste sites opposite to each other in the North. Majority of the buildings were repurposed, while turning the mine into a visitor attraction. The lunchroom and staff change room were converted into a Museum. The entrance for the coal mine served the same purpose as it did in the mine, whereas medical center got converted into a café for visitor attraction site. The lorry parking space got utilized as parking space for cars in Visitor attraction site. However, there were some buildings that got demolished completely such as the Waste site 1 & 2 and transformed into a Driving circuit and a Pond respectively. There were a few additional changes in a visitor attraction site, the addition of a Walking pathway between Driving circuit and Main entrance was established furthermore the children’s playground was added in the South corner of site.

The maps illustrate the coal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldpitstorequarryreserve
mine
 and its transformation into a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
attraction
 site.

The coal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldpitstorequarryreserve
mine
 had several key features. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 main entrance was situated
 at the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldpitstorequarryreserve
mine
. Lunchroom and Staff This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 rooms were located
 at North-west corner of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
. There was a medical center and parking space for a lorry on the West. In addition
, there were two waste You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 opposite to each other in the North.

Majority of the buildings were repurposed
, while turning the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldpitstorequarryreserve
mine
 into a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
attraction
. The lunchroom and staff This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 room were converted
 into a Museum. The entrance for the coal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldpitstorequarryreserve
mine
 served the same purpose as it did in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldpitstorequarryreserve
mine
, whereas medical center This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 converted into a café for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
attraction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 lorry parking space This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 utilized as parking space for cars in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
Visitor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
attraction
 site.

However
, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 buildings that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 demolished completely such as the Waste You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
 1 & 2 and transformed into a Driving circuit and a Pond respectively
.

There were a few additional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
attraction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
, the addition of a Walking pathway between Driving circuit and Main entrance was established
furthermore
 the children’s playground was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the South corner of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
. 