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The line chart enumerates, the information reagarding, the cost in Euros of 800 grams of four distinctive categories of bread in one European nation between 2001 to 2002 Overall, it can be manifested, the all types of bread was inclined wheras, except Multigrain was declined by end of the year.

The line chart enumerates, the information reagarding, the cost in Euros of 800 grams of four distinctive categories of bread in one European nation between 2001 to 2002 Overall, it can be manifested, the all types of bread was inclined wheras, except Multigrain was declined by end of the year. XlNjq
The line chart enumerates, the information reagarding, the cost in Euros of 800 grams of four distinctive categories of bread in one European nation between 2001 to 2002 Overall, it can be manifested, the all types of bread was inclined wheras, except Multigrain was declined by end of the year. It is lucid from the graph, in inittial time Whole grain bread value was 0. 8 Euros in next it was hike up highest cost of bread was 1. 8€ whereas, plummeted dreastically 1. 8 Euros in 2002 to 2003 was 1 Euro after one year the value of bread was declined in 2003 to 2004 was 0. 7€whilst, in the end time of period it was slight incline to 0. 8 Euros slipped back. Afterthat, in 2001 Brown bread cost was 0. 6€ it drastically inclined to 1. 5€ in 2002 after one year it was fluctuated to 2004 the value og Brown bread was 1. 4 Euros while, in 2005 it was slight incline the cost of Brown bread was 1. 6 Euros. Further scrutinizing the graph, in the starting time of period the amount of White bread was 0. 6€ it was declined to 0. 5 Euros. Afterthat, the White bread was increased sharply from 2002 to 2005 the cost of bread was 1. 3€. Thereafter, it was inclines in Rye bread was 0. 6€ that it was uniform whereas, in 2005 the cost of Rye bread was 0. 7 Euros least value of bread.
The line chart enumerates, the information
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reagarding
, the
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cost
in Euros of 800 grams of four distinctive categories of bread in one European nation
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 2001 and 2002".
between 2001 to 2002


Overall
, it can
be manifested
, the all types of bread
was inclined
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wheras
, except Multigrain
was declined
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the year.

It is lucid from the graph, in
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inittial
time Whole grain bread
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value
was 0. 8 Euros in
next
it was
Consider using a past participle here: "hiked".
hike
up highest
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cost
of bread was 1.
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "€8".
8€
whereas, plummeted
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dreastically
1. 8 Euros in 2002 to 2003 was 1 Euro after one year the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
value
of bread
was declined
in 2003 to 2004 was 0.
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "€7".
7€
whilst, in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
time of period it was slight incline to 0. 8 Euros slipped back.
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Afterthat
, in 2001 Brown bread
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cost
was 0.
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "€6".
6€
it
drastically
inclined to 1.
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "€5".
5€
in 2002 after one year it
was fluctuated
to 2004 the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
value
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og
Brown bread was 1. 4 Euros while, in 2005 it was slight incline the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cost
of Brown bread was 1. 6 Euros.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Further
scrutinizing the graph, in the starting time of period the amount of White bread was 0.
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "€6".
6€
it
was declined
to 0. 5 Euros.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Afterthat
, the White bread
was increased
sharply
from 2002 to 2005 the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cost
of bread was 1.
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "€3".
3€
. Thereafter, it was inclines in Rye bread was 0.
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "€6".
6€
that it was uniform whereas, in 2005 the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cost
of Rye bread was 0. 7 Euros
A determiner is probably missing here: "the least".
least
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
value
of bread.
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IELTS academic The line chart enumerates, the information reagarding, the cost in Euros of 800 grams of four distinctive categories of bread in one European nation between 2001 to 2002 Overall, it can be manifested, the all types of bread was inclined wheras, except Multigrain was declined by end of the year.

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