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The charts below show different kinds of energy production in a country in Europe in two years.

The charts below show different kinds of energy production in a country in Europe in two years. XlNrP
The pie charts provide information about several sources of power in a European country in two years 2000 and 2010. Overall, there were insignificant changes in the percentages of most types of energy production after 10 years, apart from petrol which fell significantly. This country still mainly depended on fossil fuels, with nuclear and renewable energies remaining minimal. In the former year, the production of energy from coal accounted for nearly a third of total generated energy, almost equal the figure for gas and petrol. Meanwhile, the energy produced by nuclear and renewable comprise a small fraction, with only 3. 2% and 3. 7%, respectively. By the latter year, the production of petrol energy had dropped considerably by almost 7% to about a quarter while coal and gas witnessed a slight growth to around 32%. Despite a nearly double climb, nuclear and renewable still made up a minority, at approximately 6% each.
The pie charts provide information about several sources of power in a European country in two years 2000 and 2010.

Overall
, there were insignificant
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changes
in the percentages of most types of
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energy
production after 10 years, apart from petrol which fell
significantly
. This country
still
mainly
depended on fossil fuels, with nuclear and renewable
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energies
remaining minimal.

In the former
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year
, the production of
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energy
from coal accounted for
nearly
a third of total generated
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, almost equal the figure for gas and petrol. Meanwhile, the
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energy
produced by nuclear and renewable comprise a
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small
fraction, with
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3. 2% and 3. 7%,
respectively
.

By the latter
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year
, the production of petrol
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had dropped
considerably
by almost 7% to about a quarter while coal and gas witnessed a slight growth to around 32%. Despite a
nearly
double climb, nuclear and renewable
still
made up a minority, at approximately 6% each.
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