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The maps illustrate how the art gallery’s ground floor has been modified between 2015 and present day.

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The maps illustrate how the art gallery’s ground floor has been modified between 2015 and present day. While the east of the ground floor has been remained unchanged, the rooms in the west have had considerably changes for the comfortable demands of visitors, with the ramp for wheel chair, the lift next to stair and the children’s area. In 2015, the receptionist was erected near the stair in the north. On present day, this receptionist has been relocated to the center and the entrance hall has been transferred next to the entrance. To the northwest of the ground, the café has been replaced with the gallery shop and the gallery office has been demolished completely and the vending machine has been installed. The stair has been narrowed slightly to construct the lift. Regarding the exhibition room 4 in the southwest of the ground floor, this room has been divided into the temporary exhibition and the children’s area. The exhibition rooms in the east of the art gallery’s ground floor has been remained in the same position over the given period.
The maps illustrate how the art
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ground
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floor
has
been modified
between 2015 and present day.

While the east of the
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ground
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floor
has
been remained
unchanged, the
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rooms
in the west have had
considerably
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changes
for the comfortable demands of visitors, with the ramp for wheel chair, the lift
next
to stair and the children’s area.

In 2015, the receptionist
was erected
near the stair in the north. On present day, this receptionist has
been relocated
to the center and the entrance hall has
been transferred
next
to the entrance. To the northwest of the
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ground
, the café has
been replaced
with the
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gallery
shop and the
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gallery
office has
been demolished
completely and the vending machine has
been installed
. The stair has
been narrowed
slightly
to construct the lift.

Regarding the exhibition
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room
4 in the southwest of the
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ground
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floor
, this
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room
has
been divided
into the temporary exhibition and the children’s area. The exhibition
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rooms
in the east of the art
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gallery’s
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ground
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floor
has
been remained
in the same position over the
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given
period.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate how the art gallery’s ground floor has been modified between 2015 and present day.

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