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The maps illustrate changes in Paradise island in the past and in the present.

The maps illustrate changes in Paradise island in the past and in the present. E7V9L
The maps illustrate how the view of Paradise island has changed from the past coming to the present time. The most notable variations were lead on Paradise islands' inside. It has been converted from ordinary isle with some facilities into a real modern entertaining area that can attract touristic flow with new erected opportunities. The novations are that in the soutwest side of the island, on the place of a small woodland a swimming pool has been framed, and by expelling Scientific Research Station there has been raised Hotel complex. The central part of the island used to own two tiny trees and a free area between them, then they has been destroyed and a huge Open restaurant and next to it BBQ were built. Besides, in the southeast corner, around the natural spring cafè has been constructed. A great amendments have been set on the island's surrounding too. First of all it should be mentioned that boat has been altered to a huge Cruise ship. Nextly, line figured Pier has been expanded and has been formed new T form. On the clockwise direction from Pier in the southeast angle Scenic Lookout has been organized. Furthermore, another notable point is expansion of cyclic path that encloses Paradise island. Overall, Paradise island has accepted its new buildings and changes from all over sides.
The maps illustrate how the view of
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changed
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Paradise
islands' inside. It has
been converted
from ordinary isle with
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some
facilities into a real modern entertaining area that can attract touristic flow with new erected opportunities. The
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novations
are that in the
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soutwest
side of the
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island
, on the place of a
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small
woodland a swimming pool has
been framed
, and by expelling Scientific Research Station there has
been raised
Hotel complex. The central part of the
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island
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used
to
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own
two tiny trees and a free area between them, then they
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has
been
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destroyed
and a huge Open restaurant and
next
to it BBQ
were built
.
Besides
, in the southeast corner, around the natural spring
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cafè
has
been constructed
.

A great
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amendments
have
been set
on the island's surrounding too.
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First of all
it should
be mentioned
that boat has
been altered
to a huge Cruise ship.
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Nextly
, line figured Pier has
been expanded
and has
been formed
new T form. On the clockwise direction from Pier in the southeast angle Scenic Lookout has
been organized
.
Furthermore
, another notable point is expansion of cyclic path that encloses
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Paradise island
.

Overall
,
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Paradise
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has
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accepted
its new buildings and
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changes
from all over sides.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate changes in Paradise island in the past and in the present.

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