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following a piece of information about the economy of Australia in the 1980 . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main feature and make camparizen

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The rendered table graph depicts the information about the Australian economy in different sectors in 1980. The data is calibrated in million dollars. To commence with, in 1988 to 89 manufacturing company profit prior to tax by industry is 8617millon dollars. That's followed by the same company with 7, 810 million dollars in the following year. In 1986-87 and 1987-1988 figures show their manufacturing profit around 4, 650and 6, 615million dollar significantly. The mining companies profit prior tax is 3840 millions and 3816 in the first two initaill years. Moving further, only 397million dollars profit could be seen in the others sector in 1989 to 1990. Almost the double increase could be seen in the retail trade in the starting years. The data of retail trade was almost same that 1349million $and 1373million dollars in last 4 Years that given in The graph. Morover, a slight difference could be seen in the others profit sector during 1987to 1989. Overall, it can be clearly seen that minimum profit could be seen in the others sector that was 397 millions dollars. , .
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IELTS academic following a piece of information about the economy of Australia in the 1980.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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