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The maps illustrate a city hospital and areas near by it in two different years.The first map provides the information about city hospital and surroundings in the year 2007 and the second map shows the hospital and near by locality in 2010 with many modifications have done over there.

The maps illustrate a city hospital and areas near by it in two different years. The first map provides the information about city hospital and surroundings in the year 2007 and the second map shows the hospital and near by locality in 2010 with many modifications have done over there. YyKgK
The maps illustrate a city hospital and areas near by it in two different years. The first map provides the information about city hospital and surroundings in the year 2007 and the second map shows the hospital and near by locality in 2010 with many modifications have done over there. Overall, in the year 2007 city hospital was having same place which was used by both car parking staff and public without having any circle square road while, there have been done some modification in the year 2010 with separate parking spaces as well as they have relocated the bus station also. It is clearly shows in the first map, car parking for all the people was across both side of the hospital road and bus station was located on the outside of the city road. On the other hand, they were not having any other round circles between the city road and the hospital road. Whereas, in the year 2010 the city hospital have bus stand opposite to staff car parking area and a separate area for public car, while they have made also two different circles between the roads of city and hospital.
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hospital
and areas
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provides the information about city
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year
2007 and the second
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hospital
and
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near by
locality in 2010 with
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many
modifications have done over there.

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year
2007 city
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hospital
was having same place which was
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used
by both
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car
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parking
staff and public without having any circle square
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road
while, there have
been done
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some
modification in the
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year
2010 with separate
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parking
spaces
as well
as they have relocated the bus station
also
.

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clearly
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,
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for all the
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hospital
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and bus station
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.
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road
and the
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hospital
road.

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year
2010 the city
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hospital
have bus stand opposite to staff
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car
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parking
area and a separate area for public
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, while they have made
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate a city hospital and areas near by it in two different years. The first map provides the information about city hospital and surroundings in the year 2007 and the second map shows the hospital and near by locality in 2010 with many modifications have done over there.

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