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The graphs below show data on Australian trades with three other countries.

The graphs below show data on Australian trades with three other countries. Ml3jp
The given line graph illustrate the information regarding the data on Australian commerce with three nations namely China, Japan and the USA within seven year period from 2002 to 2008. Overall, it is noticed that Australia export good more as compare to import except China in the last year. At the first looking, in 2000 Australia was export goods to China, Japan and the USA around 40. While, the data of trade goods to China and the USA was the same till 2008, which was near about 40. But, the export goods to Japan by Australia in 2005 was gradual increase by 40 to 60 and in 2008 it dropped to about 10 reached 50. Looking to the import goods, In 2002, Australia import goods from China and Japan was near about 40 and the least good import from the US, that was 20. After three years, the import goods accounted from China and Japan was exactly 20 and around 30. The export goods to Australia was the same ratio at the end of the period but from China it reached at top above 40 and from Japan the ratio of import good was minimum decline to blow 40.
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and the USA within
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seven year
period from 2002 to 2008.

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export
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except China in the last year.

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to China,
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and the USA around 40. While, the data of trade
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to China and the USA was the same till 2008, which was near about 40.
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, the
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to
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by Australia in 2005 was gradual increase by 40 to 60 and in 2008 it dropped to about 10 reached 50.

Looking to the
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, In 2002, Australia
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from China and
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was near about 40 and the least
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from the US, that was 20. After three years, the
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accounted from China and
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was exactly 20 and around 30. The
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to Australia was the same ratio at the
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of the period
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from China it reached at top above 40 and from
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the ratio of
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was minimum decline to blow 40.
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