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The maps give information about how a beachfront area in Australia has changed over the period from 1950 to the present.

The maps give information about how a beachfront area in Australia has changed over the period from 1950 to the present. B7lkX
The maps give information about how a beachfront area in Australia has changed over the period from 1950 to the present. Overall, the principal change to the beachfront area had the expansion of a ring road around the center. Various developments with regard to restaurant, playground and surf club have accompanied the extension of this road. As can be seen from the maps, from 1950 to 2021, the road was extended to the northeast. During the same period, the beach, pool and lighthouse in the south remained unchanged and a new surf club was constructed next to a lighthouse. Turning to other features, we can see that the dining table and pavillon at the bottom of a road have existed, whereas the playground was demolished to make way for a car park. To the west of the map, there was a construction of a restaurant and surf club and the pool has become bigger.
The maps give information about how a beachfront area in Australia has
changed
over the period from 1950 to the present.

Overall
, the principal
change
to the beachfront area had the expansion of a ring road around the center. Various developments with regard to restaurant, playground and surf club have accompanied the extension of this road.

As can be
seen
from the maps, from 1950 to 2021, the road
was extended
to the northeast. During the same period, the beach, pool and lighthouse in the south remained unchanged and a new surf club
was constructed
next
to a lighthouse.

Turning to other features, we can
see
that the dining table and
pavillon
at the bottom of a road have existed, whereas the playground
was demolished
to
make
way for a car park. To the west of the map, there was a construction of a restaurant and surf club and the pool has become bigger.

IELTS academic The maps give information about how a beachfront area in Australia has changed over the period from 1950 to the present.

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