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The graph shown wheat exports in three different regions.

The graph shown wheat exports in three different regions. 53LdN
The information about the wheat exports in three different regions such as Australia, Canada, and European community is depicted by the rendered line graph from 1985 to 1990. To begin with, the million of wheat exports was 19 millions by the Canada. however, after one year, the millions decreased sharply by 5 millions. A dramatic increase was seen in the wheat exports, it accounted for 25 millions in 1988. there was a slight decrease observed in the wheat exports, it comprised to around 14 millions in 1989. The wheat exports in Canada increased dramatically in the final year. Moving further, in the starting period, 12millions wheat exports in European, while merely 10 millions were in Australia in 1985. As reagards Australia, the wheat exports increased slightly untill1986, there was a dramatic decrease observed in the wheat exports in Australia, it accounted for11millions between 1986and 1990. A drastic decrease was noticed off the Wheat exports in European, however it inclined sharply and reached its peak around 21 millions in the final year. To sum up, it can be vividly manifested that, the higher the wheat exports in European community, while a no change can be seen in Canada's wheat and Australia hitted a least than others.
The information about the
wheat
exports
in three
different
regions such as Australia, Canada, and European community
is depicted
by the rendered line graph from 1985 to 1990. To
begin
with, the
million
of
wheat
exports
was 19
millions
by the Canada.
however
, after one year, the
millions
decreased
sharply
by 5
millions
. A dramatic increase was
seen
in the
wheat
exports
, it accounted for 25
millions
in 1988.
there
was a slight decrease observed in the
wheat
exports
, it comprised to around 14
millions
in 1989. The
wheat
exports
in Canada increased
dramatically
in the final year. Moving
further
, in the starting period,
12millions
wheat
exports
in European, while
merely
10
millions
were in Australia in 1985. As
reagards
Australia, the
wheat
exports
increased
slightly
untill1986, there was a dramatic decrease observed in the
wheat
exports
in Australia, it accounted for11millions between 1986and 1990. A drastic decrease
was noticed
off the
Wheat
exports
in European,
however
it inclined
sharply
and reached its peak around 21
millions
in the final year. To sum up, it can be
vividly
manifested that, the higher the
wheat
exports
in European community, while a no
change
can be
seen
in Canada's
wheat
and Australia
hitted
a least than others.
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IELTS academic The graph shown wheat exports in three different regions.

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