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Bar graph of women and men according the percentage of driving tests passed between 198p to 2010

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The given bar graph illustrates the proportion of driving exams passed especially men and women from 1980 to 2010. It is clear seen that in women case. In the 1980, the figure was just under half percentage. After the one decade, there was a slightlly increased and being 52%. The amount of citizens passed in driving test had a siginificant surge from 52 % in 1980 to 68% in 2000. Having inclined, the figure was decreased and reach at 62% in 2010. For men, the proporation of driving exams passed, in 1980, it was a just over the quarter(27%). Then, there was a considerable inclined in till 2010. But, the amount of driving tests passed by men during the 2000 to 2010. they shared same percentage and it was accounted for just under half(49%). Overall, in women case, there was experienced a slight fluctuation between the given year. whereas, in the men, the figure was up ward trend and last 20 years remained stable.
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under half percentage. After the one decade, there was a
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increased and being 52%. The amount of citizens
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had a
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surge from 52 % in 1980 to 68% in 2000. Having inclined, the figure
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, in 1980, it was a
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over the quarter(27%). Then, there was a considerable inclined in till 2010.
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, the amount of
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driving
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tests
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passed
by
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men
during the 2000 to 2010.
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they
shared same percentage and it
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under half(49%).

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, the figure was up ward trend and last 20 years remained stable.
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IELTS academic Bar graph of women and men according the percentage of driving tests passed between 198p to 2010

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