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The maps give information about a university sports court.

The maps give information about a university sports court. 1ayOL

The maps depict information about a university playground from 1990 to now. In overview, the sport court has changed dramatically throughout the period. Facilities such as the cafe and the swimming pool still remained unchanged positionally, meanwhile the others experienced various regeneration. In 1990, there was a car park located in the southwest with a grand park positioned above. Also, the combination pushed all of the sports infrastructure into the right side, where there were courts, pool and refreshments, . . Therefore, the left side witnessed the biggest change in the area that the parking area and the tree park was removed to concede space for a basketball court and four tennis courts. In addition, the outdoor pool now has been roofed. Down below, the locker room is lengthened and relocated to the east. The tennis courts are replaced with the gym. While there were changes, the coffee house and the reception remained constant for thirty years.

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now
.

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court
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changed
dramatically
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cafe
 and the swimming pool still
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positionally
, meanwhile the others experienced various regeneration.

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all of the
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courts
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Therefore
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side witnessed the biggest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in the area that the parking area and the tree park was removed
 to concede space for a basketball You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
 and four tennis courts.

In addition
, the outdoor pool This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 has been roofed
. Down below, the locker room is lengthened
 and relocated to the east. The tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
are replaced
 with the gym. While there were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, the coffee This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and the reception remained constant for thirty years. 