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​​The maps depict the changes which occurred in the village of Pancha from 2005 to 2015.

​​The maps depict the changes which occurred in the village of Pancha from 2005 to 2015. gqVPd
​​The maps depict the changes which occurred in the village of Pancha from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the village experienced a complete upgrade of the infrastructure, along with the expansion of the existing facilities. In 2005, the facilities in the village consisted of a primary school, a market, and a pagoda. Ten years later, the primary school had undergone a renovation with the addition of several new buildings to accommodate a secondary school. The market and pagoda also grew in size with the addition of several new buildings. Previously, a path ran through the centre of the village providing access to all buildings and facilities, however by 2015 a two lane roadway had been built in its place. The village also benefited from a new electricity supply and a new telecommunications tower located in the south. Furthermore, most houses in the village had now upgraded from old antennas to satellite receivers.
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Pancha
from 2005 to 2015.

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experienced a complete upgrade of the infrastructure, along with the expansion of the existing facilities.

In 2005, the facilities in the
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village
consisted of a primary school, a market, and a pagoda. Ten years later, the primary school had undergone a renovation with the addition of several
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new
buildings to accommodate a secondary school. The market and pagoda
also
grew in size with the addition of several
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buildings.

Previously, a path ran through the
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centre
of the
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village
providing access to all buildings and facilities,
however
by 2015 a two lane roadway had
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also
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new
electricity supply and a
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telecommunications tower located in the south.
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, most
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in the
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had
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antennas to satellite receivers.
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