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The maps below shows the town of Lynnfield in 1936 and then later in 2007.

The maps below shows the town of Lynnfield in 1936 and then later in 2007. W87ND
The two maps detail the development of Lynnfield over a period of 71 years starting from 1936. looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there were a number of notable changes to the buildings and facilities. According to the maps, at the northwest of the town, the number of trees has been decreased and at the northeast of the map, the river had largely disappeared and replaced by a residential area. At the south of the city, the cycle path at the west has become a road for cars and at the opposite side of the town, government offices and farmland have been converted into museums and golf courses respectively. In terms of the center of the city, a huge shopping center was built exactly in the middle of the facility area between the bank and supermarket. sweet shop and butchers at the north of the facility zone have been demolished in order to make room for a big supermarket also flower shop in the southeast of this region has been destroyed and replaced by a travel agent. Finally, the post office, bank, and library remained unchanged during this period.
The two maps detail the development of
Lynnfield
over a period of 71 years starting from 1936.

looking
from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that there were a number of notable
changes
to the buildings and facilities.

According to the maps, at the northwest of the town, the number of trees has
been decreased
and at the northeast of the map, the river had
largely
disappeared and replaced by a residential area. At the south of the city, the cycle path at the west has become a road for cars and at the opposite side of the town,
government
offices and farmland have
been converted
into museums and golf courses
respectively
.

In terms of the center of the city, a huge shopping center
was built
exactly in the middle of the facility area between the bank and supermarket.
sweet
shop and butchers at the north of the facility zone have
been demolished
in order to
make
room for a
big
supermarket
also
flower shop in the southeast of this region has been
destroyed
and replaced by a travel agent.
Finally
, the post office, bank, and library remained unchanged during this period.
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IELTS academic The maps below shows the town of Lynnfield in 1936 and then later in 2007.

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