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IELTS WRITING TASK 1: MULTIPLE CHART

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The bar chart depicts the proportion of adults who visited a heritage site in the previous year, 2009/2010, as well as the pie chart demonstrates the ratio of people who tend to pay a visit to a historical site in the next six months. In general, it appears that adults enjoy visiting historical sites. The historic city or town elicited the most interest, accounting for approximately 55 per cent of all responses. Subsequently, more than half of those surveyed said they planned to visit a historical site in the next six months. In terms of the bar chart, many sites such as historic gardens, historic buildings and castles, forts or ruins were pursued by approximately 43 three per cent, 38 two per cent, and 16 per cent, respectively. Adults who visited famous communities or places of worship, on the other hand, were about a quarter smaller than those who frequented the above location. The lowest point to attend is an industrial history site, which ranks fifth, followed by a scene of archaeological interest and a sports heritage site, which rank fifth and twenty, respectively. As regards the pie chart, the ratio of tourists is estimated to increase marginally in the next six months. The best part is that more than half of respondents said they expect to return to historical sites in the next six months. The lowest point, with only 15 per cent saying they would not and less than one-third unsure.
The bar
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chart
depicts the proportion of adults
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who
visited a heritage
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site
in the previous year, 2009/2010,
as well
as the pie
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chart
demonstrates the ratio of
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people
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who
tend to pay a visit to a
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historical
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site
in the
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next
six months.

In general
, it appears that adults enjoy visiting
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historical
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sites
. The historic city or town elicited the most interest, accounting for approximately 55 per cent of all responses.
Subsequently
, more than half of those surveyed said they planned to visit a
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historical
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site
in the
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next
six months.

In terms of the bar
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chart
,
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many
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sites
such as historic gardens, historic buildings and castles, forts or ruins
were pursued
by approximately 43 three per cent, 38 two per cent, and 16 per cent,
respectively
. Adults
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who
visited
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famous
communities or places of worship,
on the other hand
, were about a quarter smaller than those
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who
frequented the above location. The lowest point to attend is an industrial history
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site
, which ranks fifth, followed by a scene of archaeological interest and a sports heritage
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site
, which rank fifth and twenty,
respectively
.

As regards the pie
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chart
, the ratio of tourists
is estimated
to increase
marginally
 in the
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next
six months. The best part is that more than half of respondents said they
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expect
to return to
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historical
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sites
in the
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next
six months. The lowest point, with
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only
15 per cent saying they would not and less than one-third unsure.
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IELTS academic IELTS WRITING TASK 1: MULTIPLE CHART

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
238 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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