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The maps below shows the development between the future and now.

The maps below shows the development between the future and now. 3xrXb
The maps illustrate the town Centre called Islip which is in present and plans for its new modification. To begin with, the town has shown two access point such as school and park which is located on the southern side of the main road. While, there were two many shops has planted on both side of the main road. Although, the first residential area is situated on the eastern side of the park and the second residential area is built in front of the school which located on the south side of the main road. Moreover, a new Dual carriageway will cover a main place of the Islip town centre on the west-east side of the Dual carriageway. In Addition that, the transportation facilities and shopping center, car park will newly renovated from the shops which has on the north side of the main road. While the main road will become a predestination way and shops will construct next to the pedestrians way. Furthermore, the housing development will be added in the town centre which will newly renovated beside of the main road. The park will reduced in a small place of the town centre of the eastern side of the main road. Overall, the transportation facilities and Dual carriageway has been an interesting change over the time period which is shows future and present time period.
The maps illustrate the
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has shown two access point such as school and
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park
which
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main
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. While, there were
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two
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shops has planted on both side of the
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main
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. Although, the
first
residential area
is situated
on the eastern side of the
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park
and the second residential area
is built
in front of the school which located on the south side of the
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main
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.
Moreover
, a new Dual carriageway will cover a
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main
place of the
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Islip
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on the west-east side of the Dual carriageway. In
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that, the transportation facilities and shopping center, car
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from the shops which has on the north side of the
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main
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. While the
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will become a predestination way and shops will construct
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centre
which will
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. The
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place of the
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Overall
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