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An economist compared the average hourly wages for four different jobs in the U.S.A.

An economist compared the average hourly wages for four different jobs in the U. S. A. xgpW9

The graphic organizer above illustrates the average hourly wage over four different jobs in the USA. The graph indicates the amount of money ranging from $3O to $7O. It ranges between four jobs which are Statisticians, Optometrist, Dentist, and Nurse. Overall, we can notice that the least amount was paid to the nurse. As the graphic indicates, the average hourly wage to the nurse is $30. On the other hand, we can also notice that $70 is the average hourly wage for the dentist which makes the dentist the highest. However, Statisticians and Optometrist's average hourly wage are close to each other. Moreover, Statisticians's hourly wage is $40 while the optometrist's wage is $50, so there is not much difference. Summarizing the findings, it can be seen that the average hourly wage between Statisticians and Dentists is increased gradually. On the other hand, Nurse has the least average wage per hour

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