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The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen bye british when they went on holiday in 2010.

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The bar graph explicates the information about the various categories of living quaters selected by Britons when they had gone on vacations during 2010. Overall, hotel was the only accommodation in which Britishers were having more interest as compare to other, while it seems that caravan and camping were least preferred by Bristish people. According to the presentation in England, around 30% Britishers gave priority to self-catering followed by Britons had interest to stay in hotel in comparison with other (caravan and camping). Moreover, hotel and self catering types of accommodation were most preferred by British people in Scotland same as England, whereas slightly over 10% of Britishers were chosen camping as living quaters. Only 5% of Britons selected camping when they came on vacation in Scotland. As it can be clearly observed that in Wales, caravan was the only living place in which Britishers had less interest (less than 10). However, there were two different kinds of houses such as hotel and self- catering which was chosen by British people as a accommodation (near 50% and above 20% respectively). Furthermore, in Northern Ireland more than 40% of Britishers gave more priority to hotel opposed to other three types of accommodation.
The bar graph explicates the information about the various categories of living
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selected by Britons when they had gone on vacations during 2010.
Overall
,
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hotel
was the
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only
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accommodation
in which Britishers were having more interest as compare to other, while it seems that caravan and camping were least preferred by
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Bristish
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people
. According to the presentation in England, around 30% Britishers gave priority to self-catering followed by Britons had interest to stay in
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hotel
in comparison
with other (caravan and camping).
Moreover
,
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hotel
and
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self catering
types of
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accommodation
were most preferred by British
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people
in Scotland same as England, whereas
slightly
over 10% of Britishers
were chosen
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camping
as living
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.
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Only
5% of Britons selected camping when they came on vacation in Scotland. As it can be
clearly
observed that in Wales, caravan was the
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only
living place in which Britishers had less interest (less than 10).
However
, there were two
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different
kinds of
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houses
such as
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hotel
and self- catering which
was chosen
by British
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people
as
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accommodation
(near 50% and above 20%
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).
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, in Northern Ireland more than 40% of Britishers gave more priority to
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hotel
opposed to other three types of
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accommodation
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen bye british when they went on holiday in 2010.

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