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The maps below shows the centre of small town called islip as it is now and then

The maps below shows the centre of small town called islip as it is now and then 26lAj

The two maps illustrate the present and future modification of the islip town centre. First of all the first map shows that islip town center is close to the countryside and it has more space for shops, park and for housing and Main road connects the centre. While the second map depicts the future modification of the town. The whole town will be connected by the oval shape dual carriageway and in the place north east shops bus station, shipping centre and car parking wil be build and in remaining place new house will be construct and in south east more housing facilities will be build and it reduce to the size of park. to sum up new housing facilities will attract more people towards the town and with the dual carriageway will make Transportation easier and it also increase the size of school in future.

The two maps illustrate the present and future modification of the Possible spelling mistake found.slipISIPi slipis lip
islip
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
 the first
 map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that Possible spelling mistake found.slipISIPi slipis lip
islip
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 center is close to the countryside and it has more space for shops, park and for housing and Main road connects the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 the second map depicts the future modification of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
. The whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 will be connected
 by the oval shape dual carriageway and in the place This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 shops bus station, shipping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and car parking Possible spelling mistake found.willwinoilwildWillwit
wil
 be build and in remaining place new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 will be Consider using a past participle here: "constructed".constructed
construct
 and in This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
 more housing facilities will be build and it Did you mean "reduces"?reduces
reduce
 to the size of park. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
 sum up new housing facilities will attract more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 towards the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 and with the dual carriageway will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 Transportation easier and it also
Did you mean "increases"?increases
increase
 the size of school Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. 