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The timetables below show the weekend activities at Newtown Swimming Pool and the proposed new timetable. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The timetables below show the weekend activities at Newtown Swimming Pool and the proposed new timetable. BYaD6
The timetables illustrate activities at the weekend at Newton Swimming Pool in the current and the proposed table. Overall, the new timetable has removed two children exercises and sorted the activities for children and adults into different days. It can easily be seen that each Saturday and Sunday, the Pool opens at 9: 00 and closes at 16: 00, it has 7 shifts a day, each of them lasts for 1 hour. According to the current schedule, the three first shifts of Saturday are all children classes, which are Beginners, Intermediate and Advanced, respectively. The classes for adults at the level of intermediate and advance are arranged at the two last shifts. Lesson about water safety for children is at 13: 00-14: 00 on Saturday, the lesson on Sunday is one-hour earlier than that on Saturday. Looking at the plan, on Saturday, while all the lessons for children remain unchanged, those for adults have been arranged to a day later. In addition, a water polo class has been added at 12: 00-13: 00. As is shown in the current table of Sunday, the first and the last shift are blank. The remains are three children and two adult classes. The Intermediate lesson for children starts at 10: 00 and ends at 11: 00, following by an activity for young beginners. Another noteworthy observation is that in both timetables, the advanced exercises for adults are from 14: 00 to 15: 00. In the proposed schedule, it can be witnessed that although a water safety lesson for children has been removed, two for adults are added at 13: 00-14: 00 and the last shift of the day.
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, the new timetable has removed two
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children
exercises and sorted the activities for
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children
and
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adults
into
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different
days.

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easily
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seen
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and Sunday, the Pool opens at 9: 00 and closes at 16: 00, it has 7
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shifts
a day, each of them
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lasts
for 1 hour. According to the
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current
schedule, the three
first
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shifts
of
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Saturday
are all
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children
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classes
, which are Beginners, Intermediate and Advanced,
respectively
. The
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classes
for
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adults
at the level of intermediate and advance
are arranged
at the two last
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shifts
.
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Lesson
about water safety for
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children
is at 13: 00-14: 00 on
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Saturday
, the
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on Sunday is one-hour earlier than that on
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Saturday
. Looking at the plan, on
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Saturday
, while all the
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lessons
for
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children
remain unchanged, those for
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adults
have
been arranged
to a day later.
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, a water polo
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class
has been
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added
at 12: 00-13: 00.

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table of Sunday, the
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shift
are blank. The remains are three
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children
and two adult
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classes
. The Intermediate
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lesson
for
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children
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starts
at 10: 00 and ends at 11: 00, following by an activity for young beginners. Another noteworthy observation is that in both timetables, the advanced exercises for
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adults
are from 14: 00 to 15: 00. In the proposed schedule, it can
be witnessed
that although a water safety
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for
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children
has
been removed
, two for
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are
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added
at 13: 00-14: 00 and the last
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shift
of the day.
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IELTS academic The timetables below show the weekend activities at Newtown Swimming Pool and the proposed new timetable.

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