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The line graphs show the proportion of urban and rural population and by age.

The line graphs show the proportion of urban and rural population and by age. 6l6qx
The istensible line graphs detail the information about the percentage of world-wide citizens on the basis of modern and backlamd areas also on the three various age levels from the periods 1950 to until the predicted years of 2040. Having a clear glance, it can be seen that the proportion if urbanised population was near about 5 % in 1950 and that was slightly fell by. 5% in 1960 but grom 1970 that was nearly 5% which will be remained steafy till 2040. Whereas, the figure of bachland area was just 1% higher than from town in initial year, however the total percentage for both locations was began by over 10%. After, the beginning of year the whole number of residents and the figure of rural population was increased dramatically and would be touched at almost 43% and 35 % respectively. Turning to the remaing information, it can be observed that there was a considerable difference in the number of individuals who were belong to teenage and older atage because their percentile was stoid at nearly 3% in 1950, on the contrary under 15 aged people figure was soared to 5 % in 1960 but over 65 were stable at first statistics, whilst from 1970 to until 2040 both age groups population will be constant at 5 %. In contrast, significant upward trend was followed by younger 's atarting from 5 % to will be hitted at 35 % by 2040 with one third increase. Looking from an overall perspwctive, it can be readily apparent that the entire inhabitants data was the highest in comparison of single agricuktural and town populationnalso 15- 65 age people number was more in past, present and will be in the ensuing years.
The
istensible
line graphs detail the information about the percentage of world-wide citizens on the basis of modern and
backlamd
areas
also
on the three various age levels from the periods 1950 to until the predicted years of 2040.

Having a
clear
glance, it can be
seen
that the proportion if
urbanised
population was near about 5 % in 1950 and that was
slightly
fell by. 5% in 1960
but
grom
1970 that was
nearly
5% which will
be remained
steafy
till 2040. Whereas, the figure of
bachland
area was
just
1% higher than from town in initial
year
,
however
the total percentage for both locations was
began
by over 10%. After, the beginning of
year
the whole number of residents and the figure of rural population
was increased
dramatically
and would
be touched
at almost 43% and 35 %
respectively
.

Turning to the
remaing
information, it can
be observed
that there was a considerable difference in the number of individuals who were
belong
to teenage and older
atage
because
their percentile was
stoid
at
nearly
3% in 1950,
on the contrary
under 15 aged
people
figure
was soared
to 5 % in 1960
but
over 65 were stable at
first
statistics, whilst from 1970 to until 2040 both age groups population will be constant at 5 %.
In contrast
, significant upward trend
was followed
by younger 's
atarting
from 5 % to will be
hitted
at 35 % by 2040 with one third increase.

Looking from an
overall
perspwctive
, it can be
readily
apparent that the entire inhabitants data was the highest
in comparison
of single
agricuktural
and town
populationnalso
15- 65
age
people
number was more
in past
, present and will be in the ensuing years.

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