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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. LK6G

The supplied bar graph represents the levels of air pollution (measured in PPM) in four different countries caused by three distinct sectors including Electricity generation, transportation and industry. At the first glance, it is clear that air pollution level is by far the highest in China. In contrast, Australia is the most environmental friendly country with low levels of air pollution according to the graph. It can be noticed that the main contributor to air pollution in China and Japan is Industrial sector high as 80 PPM and just over 40PPM respectively. Regarding the transport as a cause, in America it contributed roughly 60PPM, whereas electricity and industry contributed approximately 30PPM. Similarly, in Japan, transportation caused 70PPM. It is obvious that all three causes in Australia have remained relatively the same, just under 20PPM. Electricity has remained under 20PPM also in Japan.

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