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The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. rR82
The maps indicates the differences of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010 Overall, when we take a look at the maps, we see there are noticeable variations in the village over the years, however, there are some places has not been replaced or changed. There is a bridge in the north side of the village, right after that was a Farmland in the east side whereas other Farmland was in the south west of the village. Both of the Farmlands are not a part of the village anymore. Shops also have taken from where it used to be. However Post office are still reminds. Although Primary school are still there, it has some differences between its 1930 and 2000 shapes. There are more road lanes nowadays along the River Stoke. Although it used to be two different places (Gardens and Large house) in the east side of the village in 1930, it turns out one place which is called Retirement home. On the other hand Key houses have not been touched.
The maps
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the differences of
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Stokeford
between 1930 and 2010

Overall
, when we take a look at the maps, we
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see
there are noticeable variations in the
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village
over the years,
however
, there are
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some
places has not
been replaced
or
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changed
.

There is a bridge in the north side of the
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village
, right after that was a Farmland in the east side whereas other Farmland was in the
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south west
of the
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village
. Both of the Farmlands are not a part of the
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village
anymore. Shops
also
have taken from where it
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used
to be.
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However
Post office are
still
reminds. Although Primary school are
still
there, it has
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some
differences between its 1930 and 2000 shapes. There are more road lanes nowadays along the River Stoke. Although it
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used
to be two
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different
places (Gardens and Large
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house
) in the east side of the
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village
in 1930, it turns out one place which
is called
Retirement home.
On the other hand
Key
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houses
have not
been touched
.

IELTS academic The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

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170 words
6.0
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