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The chart and table below show the statistics of Netflix subscribers in Indonesia between 2018 to 2020 and the reason why people were getting more interested in subscribing Netflix.

The chart and table below show the statistics of Netflix subscribers in Indonesia between 2018 to 2020 and the reason why people were getting more interested in subscribing Netflix. WA8e

The diagrams illustrate how people got attracted to subscribe Netflix, and how many people in Indonesia subscribing Netflix from 2018 to 2020. Overall, it can be seen that from year to year the amount who subscribing Netflix increased, and that 2020 was the biggest figures. The following paragraphs are going to explain the major features in detail. To begin, the figures for reason why people interested to subscribing Netflix started at a similar percent, around 40-50%, but reason for “can watch as many movies as I want” is the highest cause with 72, 5 percentages. The different between “Enjoy the global content available” and “Can watch as many shows I want” only 2, 3%, and the lowest percentages go to “bored with national TV stations” with 40, 5%. By far the most popular year where people subscribe Netflix in 2020 at approximately 900 thousand subscribers, followed by 2019 at 481 thousand. In 2019 was the smallest enthusiasts Netflix at around 200. 000.

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