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Study the graph in figure below, which show changes in the amount of food produced in different parts of the world between 1965 and 1988.

Study the graph in figure below, which show changes in the amount of food produced in different parts of the world between 1965 and 1988. JWKD
The line graph describe the variate number of food production in four continents in 23years (1965-1988) It can be clearly seen that four area has start at index number of 100 in 1965, and Asia has the highest amount food been produce with almost 150, and Africa was the lowest level of food production of less than 100 in 1988. Asia has a similar trend with Western Europe, they both rise slightly from the start, and get various after 1975. Western Europe had 110 amounts of food and marginally fluctuated. Toward 130. By observing the figure, Asia had a significant increase after a stable growth in the first 10 Years, which rose 50% according. To the graph. North American and Africa had a downward slope from the beginning, however, North America changes after 1970, A dramatic rise in 120, and shows a zigzag trend falling down toward 105. Whiles Africa gradually decreased and reached 80 in 1988
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production in four continents in 23years (1965-1988)

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that four area has
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at index number of 100 in 1965, and Asia has the highest amount
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been produce with almost 150, and Africa was the lowest level of
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production of less than 100 in 1988.

Asia has a similar trend with Western Europe, they both rise
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various after 1975. Western Europe had 110 amounts of
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and
marginally
fluctuated. Toward 130. By observing the figure, Asia had a significant increase after a stable growth in the
first
10 Years, which rose 50% according. To the graph.

North American and Africa had a downward slope from the beginning,
however
, North America
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after 1970, A dramatic rise in 120, and
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a zigzag trend falling down toward 105. Whiles Africa
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decreased and reached 80 in 1988
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IELTS academic Study the graph in figure below, which show changes in the amount of food produced in different parts of the world between 1965 and 1988.

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