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The table below shows the table made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The table below shows the table made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Rx5P
The presented table provides information on the food choice (coffee, teas, pastries, sandwiches) of employees visiting a cafe in their office premises on a regular weekday. Overall, it can be seen that coffee and pastries are the most preferred choice among the staffs. In fact, they are coupled up as a breakfast and evening snack option while sandwich were a favourable lunch and dinner option. Coffee appears to be consumed throughout the day with more than 150 people having them at any given point. Teas are usually had in the morning hours (just under 120) after which it witnesses a considerable decline in their consumption with less than 75 employees drinking it. Unsurprisingly, more than 150 pastries were sold during 7. 30-10. 30 and 14. 30-17. 30. Sandwiches were had for lunches and dinners with just over 100 staff member consuming them in the former and around 200 consuming them in the latter.
The presented table provides information on the food choice (coffee, teas, pastries, sandwiches) of employees visiting a
cafe
in their office premises on a regular weekday.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that coffee and pastries are the most preferred choice among the staffs. In fact, they
are coupled
up as a breakfast and evening snack option while sandwich were a
favourable
lunch and dinner option.

Coffee appears to
be consumed
throughout the day with more than 150
people
having them at any
given
point. Teas are
usually
had in the morning hours (
just
under 120) after which it witnesses a considerable decline in their consumption with less than 75 employees drinking it.

Unsurprisingly
, more than 150 pastries
were sold
during 7. 30-10. 30 and 14. 30-17. 30. Sandwiches
were had
for lunches and dinners with
just
over 100 staff
member
consuming them in the former and around 200 consuming them in the latter.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the table made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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