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The diagram illustrates the connection among a tourist attraction suffer in its advancement At the beginning of the process, new hotels were founded, their firms built direct jobs in the hotels. Following by, they create demand for local companies and give financial support for new hotels' construction, together with, the attraction of the other companies moving into the location. The worker's expenditure in hotels and other businesses in this region devote to increasing the area's tax and revenue that enable to indirectly expansion of more new careers. The more people spend or pay taxes, the more money is utilized to expand infrastructure and enhance the quality of tourism services which make this zone become more popular. When they are renowned, more profits for reinvestment to build up new hotels. However, in this construction, the reinvestment into expansion plans, some money may be lost through leakages

The diagram illustrates the connection among a tourist attraction suffer in its advancement

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