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What stands out from the given information that is the highest score was demonstrated by paper and cardboard by 80 percent in 1994. However, the lowest degree belonged to Plastics about 3 percent in 1990. Other indexes differed from each other category by category. It is cleasrly seen that paper and cardboard stood at between 60 and 70 in the beginning of period and it was increased till 1986. Glass containers dicreased from 50 to 40 in the period of 8 years but Alumininium cans were rose sharply from about 5 to approximately 45 between 1986 and 2010 and Plastics also were increased slightly in the period of 20 years. Paper and cardboard dicreased from 80 to 70 between 1994 and 2010 but Alumininium cans were rose sharply in the period of 16 years
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