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The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950.

The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. 2baj6

The two maps show the town of Langley in the years 1910 and 1950 and the urban developments that took place. Overall, there were a number of notable changes to the buildings and amenities of this area. In 1910, the area had a combination of residential and industrial features, but by 1950 the industrial features had largely disappeared. When Whereas in 1910 a railway line ran through the neighbourhood, by 1950 this had been removed. Furthermore, the townhouses which used to dominate the 1910 map had been replaced by blocks of flats by 1950, and the areas of wasteland had gone. Another major change to the area in 1950 was the development of more commercial and recreational features. The demolition of a second row of houses on Sherman Street and the removal of the railway line made room for a spacious park and children's play area. Thinking commercially On the commercial side, to the right of the park some new stores were built on the aptly named New Lane, replacing the small store of 1910, and the cafe and laundry were relocated. At last To sum up, the area was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes to its residential accommodation, and its commercial and recreational facilities were developed.

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 to the buildings and amenities of this area.

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 of wasteland had gone.

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 and laundry were relocated
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