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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. DlobE
The bar graph compares the percentage (%) of households residing in rented house and in owned homes in given two countries England and Wale for the year 1918 to 2011. In 1916, around 76%of households were staying in rented accommodation while, nearly 21% resided in owned house. Percentage of people living in paid housing dropped around 12% in 1939. Further, owned accommodation increased nearly by 10% and remained same till 1963. In 1971 both owned and rented housing came at same preference level at 50% in England and in Wale. There was drastic change noticed in owned living house in 1991 reaching the peak point of approximately 69% but slight decrease was seen in 2011. After 1971, rented accommodation declined and reached around 31% and further minor increment was seen in 2011. Overall, it can be seen that before 1971 individuals were highly staying in rented house and after 1971 more number of people shifted in owned place.
The bar graph compares the percentage (%) of households residing in rented
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and in
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homes in
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two countries England and Wale for the year 1918 to 2011.

In 1916, around 76%of households were staying in rented accommodation while,
nearly
21% resided in
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owned
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house
. Percentage of
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people
living in paid housing dropped around 12% in 1939.
Further
,
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owned
accommodation increased
nearly
by 10% and remained same till 1963. In 1971 both
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owned
and rented housing came at same preference level at 50% in England and in Wale.

There was drastic
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change
noticed in
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owned
living
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house
in 1991 reaching the peak point of approximately 69%
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but
slight decrease was
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seen
in 2011. After 1971, rented accommodation declined and reached around 31% and
further
minor increment was
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seen
in 2011.

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, it can be
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seen
that
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before
1971 individuals were
highly
staying in rented
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house
and after 1971 more number of
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people
shifted in
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owned
place.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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