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Describe the process of how to recycling aluminum cans

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The diagram shows how aluminum cans are recycled after being used. Overall, this process has a number of steps which start with collecting used cans and finish with reusing cans for many fields. At first, the used cans are gathered at a collecting point. After that, they are transported to treatment factories. At this place, the collected cans are cleaned to eliminating dust, and then they are sorted into different categories and shredded into small sizes which makes it easier for the next steps. After being compressed to reduce the volume, they are transferred into a melting furnace, and temperature is increased to the melting point of aluminum. At the next step, aluminum in liquid form is quickly pressed into thin sheets with a thickness in a range of 2. 5-6 mm. Finally, it is rolled and moved to molding equipment to produce new cans. In this process, 74 percent of raw material is recycled and delivered to the customer.

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cans
are gathered
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reduce
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, it is rolled
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. In this process, 74 percent of raw material is recycled
 and delivered to the customer. 