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the maps below show the changes in new town cinema in 1980 and today

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The two maps compare the difference of a cinema called New Town in the year 1980 and today. Overall, not only have almost all areas inside the cinema have been either replaced or changed, except for the entrance and the ticket shop but some places also have had the changing in both width and length. To begin, it can be clearly seen from the maps that the car park has been replaced by the decision of the movie theater's manager. Nowadays, the drinks shop has also included food and the shop was moved from the bottom right corner (from the entrance) to the opposite left corner where theater 1 previously was. And the DVD store was replaced with food and drinks. In addition, the owner of the movie theater decided to construct a relaxation room to the right of the food and drinks shop. Besides, the movie rooms have also changed. There are three cinemas were added, respectively cinema 3, cinema 4 and cinema 5. These three cinema rooms are located at the right of the movie theater, and the cinema 3 built at the right corner has the biggest width compared with two others. At the left corner is cinema 2 position, then there is a toilet which is between cinema 1 and cinema 2.

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