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the maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The two maps illustrate the different changes that are going to be made to the centre of Islip town in a planned development. Overall, the most noticeable feature includes a replanning and additional contructions to give the centre more ulitities. Particularly, in the future, the countryside in the north of the town will be disappeared, while the centre is going to be surrounded by a dual carriageway which bring more convenient transport amongst housing, school and country side. The centre of Islip town is located to the north of the school. Originally, the south shop-system passing though the centre and the nearby housing are kept, meanwhile other areas will be changed significantly. Specifically, the main road will be replaced by a pedestrians one; the north shops are demolished and transform into new facilities as a bus stop, a shopping centre and a car park. Another important addition is two new housing built in the plan, in which one will be between the origin housing and a smaller park relocated and one which will be to the east of the carpark is linked with the dual way. Moreover, school is experienced to open extended and still at the prior situation in the south-west of the centre.
The two maps illustrate the
different
changes
that are going to
be made
to the
centre
of
Islip
town in a planned development.

Overall
, the most noticeable feature includes a replanning and additional
contructions
to give the
centre
more
ulitities
.
Particularly
, in the future, the countryside in the north of the town will
be disappeared
, while the
centre
is going to
be surrounded
by a dual carriageway which bring more convenient transport amongst housing, school and country side.

The
centre
of
Islip
town
is located
to the north of the school.
Originally
, the south shop-system passing though the
centre
and the nearby housing are
kept
, meanwhile other areas will be
changed
significantly
.
Specifically
, the main road will
be replaced
by a pedestrians one; the north shops
are demolished
and transform into new facilities as a bus
stop
, a shopping
centre
and a car park.

Another
important
addition is two new housing built in the plan, in which one will be between the origin housing and a smaller park relocated and one which will be to the east of the
carpark
is linked
with the dual way.
Moreover
, school
is experienced
to open extended and
still
at the prior situation in the south-west of the
centre
.
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IELTS academic the maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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