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The bar graph illustrates information about the total number of students in the U. K University, the pie chart shows the percentage of students by low income, middle income and high-income categories in 1991and line graph depicts how much pounds was spent on each student bu government from 1991to 2001.

The bar graph illustrates information about the total number of students in the U. K University, the pie chart shows the percentage of students by low income, middle income and high-income categories in 1991and line graph depicts how much pounds was spent on each student bu government from 1991to 2001. Firstly, according to the graph university in the UK covered 10 lakh a total number of students in 1991and followed by 15 lakh in 1993. In 1995 and 1997 they increased slightly to around 2 lakh. However, they surged tremendously in 1999and fall down in 2001, there was 20 lakh a total number of students. Secondly, according to the pie chart the maximum percentage of students by the middle income, it was 30% and one-third of students by the high-income family and merely 8% by a low-income family in 1991. Moreover, most of the expenditure was spent on each student in 1191 and plunged by approximately 5000 in 1996 and 2001. Overall, the bar graph shows the total number of students was less in the initial year and consistently increased between the period of 19930 to 1999. Pie chart, middle-income family converted more population rather than me.
The bar
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illustrates information about the
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total
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number
of
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students
in the U. K University, the pie chart
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shows
the percentage of
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students
by low income, middle income and high-income categories in 1991and line
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graph
depicts how much pounds
was spent
on each
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student
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bu
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government
from 1991to 2001.

Firstly
, according to the
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graph
university in the UK covered 10
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lakh
a
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total
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number
of
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students
in 1991and followed by 15
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lakh
in 1993. In 1995 and 1997 they increased
slightly
to around 2
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lakh
.
However
, they surged
tremendously
in 1999and fall down in 2001, there was 20
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lakh
a
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total
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number
of students.

Secondly
, according to the pie chart the maximum percentage of
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students
by the middle income, it was 30% and one-third of
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students
by the high-income family and
merely
8% by a low-income family in 1991.
Moreover
, most of the expenditure
was spent
on each
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student
in 1191 and plunged by approximately 5000 in 1996 and 2001.

Overall
, the bar
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graph
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shows
the
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total
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number
of
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students
was less in the initial year and
consistently
increased between the period of 19930 to 1999. Pie chart, middle-income family converted more population
rather
than me.
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IELTS academic The bar graph illustrates information about the total number of students in the U. K University, the pie chart shows the percentage of students by low income, middle income and high-income categories in 1991and line graph depicts how much pounds was spent on each student bu government from 1991to 2001.

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