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The table shows the different things people in the UK spend their money on. summarise the information by selecting and

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The table shows the average weekly spending in UK household on different goods and services. Generally, we can see that spending on essential costs, like rent payments, food bills and transport fares, is greater than it is for items that are less essential. Housing is particularly large cost and account for 27 per cent of people’s spending on average, the largest item of expenditure. Other essential costs, namely transport, food and household bills, account for an additional of 32 per cent of spending By comparison, spending on less essential items is quite low. If we look at spending on education course and new clothes, we see that these two costs take up only two and five per cent of household budget respectively. Nevertheless, spending on non-essential items is high. Most notably, people spend 20 per cent of their budgets on leisure expenses like eating out, spending nights in hotels (which together account for eight percent of spending) and other recreation costs (12 per cent
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IELTS academic The table shows the different things people in the UK spend their money on.

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