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The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.

The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc. ) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. wGdm
The given table shows the percentage of the consumers durable in Britain from 1972 to 1983. In general, tv is among the top most electronic item in Britain from 1972 to 1983 with vacuum cleaner on the second, It can be seen that tv and vacuum cleaner are most popular household appliances with high percentage of 93 and 87 respectively which further increase to 98 to 95 in the upcoming 10 years. central heating system can be found in every house with a percentage of 33 in 1972 which increase gradually to 64 in 1983. This shows that the central heating wasn't common household item in the year 1972 but become popular in next few years. Refrigerator and washing machine also one of the most used item in Britain after tv and vacuum cleaner. There ratio increased by 21 % and 14% over the given period of time. Dishwasher was introduced in 1978 and its ratio increased by only 2 %. only 18 % of the British families had a video recorder in 1983. the significance changes in the percentage of items shows that lifestyle of the people had changed over the years.
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in Britain from 1972 to 1983 with vacuum cleaner on the second, It can be
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of 33 in 1972 which increase
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1972
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18 % of the British families had a video recorder in 1983.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc. ) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.

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