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graph show the differences in Wheat Exports 1985-1990

graph show the differences in Wheat Exports 1985-1990 g5Ynl

The line graph gives the idea about the comparison between three countries about the Export ratio of wheat from 1985 to 1990. All three countries which are Australia, Canada and European Community are same export amount between 15-20 in millions of tones in 1985 year. After the one year no any changes was observed in ratio of wheat export. But in the 1987 various up and down facing about the transport of the wheat. Canada is increasing market overseas for wheat till the 1988. It is near about the 25 millions of tones. However, transport amount of the Canada is fall down gradually only in one year. The Export history of Australia was decreasing in level throughout from 1985 to 1990. European community exported steadily for 3 years around the 15 millions of tones wheat. At the last the graph shown that the highest amount of the wheat is Europe area in 1990.

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