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The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. OVM0p

The given bar charts show the statistics about ownership of computer from 2002 to 2010. As first chart gives data as percentage of whole population whereas second chart gives same information which is divided in 5 different level of education. Overall, as charts indicated, overall ownership of computer system has been increased steadily for the given period of time. Furthermore, if we see growth in ownership of the same based on the level of education, we can see clear difference from 2002 to 2010 which is reflecting dramatic increment with the educational growth. In the first bar chart, ownership of computer was almost 55% in 2002 which reached to 75% in 2010. As we can see, clear marginal increment is shown over the years as in year 2002 it was 60% which was followed by the same amount of increment in 2006 with 65% and 2008 with 70% of ownership. As second chart illustrates, highest number of computer owners are post grad degree holder which is highest in both the year 2002(70%) and 2010(90%). However, reverse trend is followed by no high school diploma holder with least owning computers in both the year 2002 and 2010 which is 15% and 40% respectively. As we can notice, for high school graduates percentage of possessing computer has been almost doubled from 2002 to 2010 and resulted as 65% at the end of the given period.

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