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The maps below show Coco Island as it is now and plans for how it will be developed over the next 5 years.

The maps below show Coco Island as it is now and plans for how it will be developed over the next 5 years. 3xW1n
The two maps show how Coco island appears today and how it is predicted to appear after development takes place over the next 5 years. It is clear that the currently uninhabited island will undergo many changes in order to make it into a resort island suitable for tourists. Starting in the south of the island, a pier will be constructed, allowing passengers to easily access the island from boats. Immediately north of the dock but still close to the southern coast, the hotel reception will be situated in a large building. On the northern coast of the island, the hotel restaurant will be built, affording ocean views for diners. Visitors to the resort will stay in villas situated in either the east or the west of the island. Those in the west will be in beach villas, which will be close to the island's only swimming beach. Those located in the east are to be constructed around an area of palm trees. All of the planned buildings will be connected by footpaths.
The two maps
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5 years.

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island
will undergo
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changes
in order to
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make
it into a resort
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suitable for tourists.

Starting in the south of the
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island
, a pier will
be constructed
, allowing passengers to
easily
access the
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island
from boats. Immediately north of the dock
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but
still
close to the southern coast, the hotel reception will
be situated
in a large building. On the northern coast of the
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island
, the hotel restaurant will
be built
, affording ocean views for diners.

Visitors to the resort will stay in villas situated in either the east or the west of the
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island
. Those in the west will be in beach villas, which will be close to the island's
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only
swimming beach. Those located in the east are to
be constructed
around an area of palm trees.
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All of the
planned buildings will
be connected
by footpaths.
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IELTS academic The maps below show Coco Island as it is now and plans for how it will be developed over the next 5 years.

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