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Write a report describing the figures of various types of publicatons borrowed based on the table below

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The table describes the number of various types of books borrowed in a community library for January 2008. There are two figures groups: books lent to community members and those lent to non-community members. It is clear that the community members loaned more publications than the non-community members. The figures of community members are divided into two groups, male and female. The males borrowed 430 science books, 259 humanities books and 99 magazines. The females borrowed 125 science books, 36 humanities books and 135 magazines. The number of science books lent to males is more than three times higher than those lent to females and eight times higher than those lent to non-community members.
The table
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describes
the number of various types of
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books
borrowed in a
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community
library for January 2008. There are two figures groups:
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books
lent to
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community
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members
and those lent to non-community members.

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clear
that the
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community
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members
loaned more publications than the non-community
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members
. The figures of
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community
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members
are divided
into two groups, male and female. The males borrowed 430 science
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books
, 259 humanities
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books
and 99 magazines.
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The
females borrowed 125 science
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books
, 36 humanities
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books
and 135 magazines.
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The
number of science
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books
lent to males is more than three times higher than those lent to females and eight times higher than those lent to non-community
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members
.

IELTS academic Write a report describing the figures of various types of publicatons borrowed based on the table below

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