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y subjects in 2005. There are apparent differences in choice of subjects between the males and the females. The number of female who chose their favorite subjects ranged from under 25 thousands to under 5 thousands, a difference of around 20 thousands. The most of subjects is chosen is in social sciences, languages while their least choice was in Mathematics

y subjects in 2005. There are apparent differences in choice of subjects between the males and the females. The number of female who chose their favorite subjects ranged from under 25 thousands to under 5 thousands, a difference of around 20 thousands. The most of subjects is chosen is in social sciences, languages while their least choice was in Mathematics yNg7g
The chart shows the numbers of female and male students who chose different university subjects in 2005. There are apparent differences in choice of subjects between the males and the females. The number of female who chose their favorite subjects ranged from under 25 thousands to under 5 thousands, a difference of around 20 thousands. The most of subjects is chosen is in social sciences, languages while their least choice was in Mathematics
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IELTS academic y subjects in 2005. There are apparent differences in choice of subjects between the males and the females. The number of female who chose their favorite subjects ranged from under 25 thousands to under 5 thousands, a difference of around 20 thousands. The most of subjects is chosen is in social sciences, languages while their least choice was in Mathematics

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